Today in class I made some refinements to my storyboards by attempting to make them more dynamic. Using suggestions from Jamie I am making use of reveals, zooms, and pans to enhance my storyboards.
The first on will be a live action video that uses 2 humans to play out the roles of the characters. The story is pretty much the same, I have just made more use of camera techniques to make the video more dynamic. The locations of the characters has changed as well.
The second one I will attempt to use mannequins to act out the roles. The video will start out zoomed in very close, with the phone being the main focus for the first exchange of messages, but will zoom out revealing the mannequin characters. As of now I would shoot this inside a department store. I would have to get permission, or be careful not to get into trouble.
I will spend some time this week refining my diagram and these 2 storyboards for crit on Friday.